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i've always admired water, its tendency to take the path of least resistance, gently eroding without being openly abrasive. and i've always admired you, though our definition of always seems to differ and the [drip-drop] of (water-clocks) has long since gone out of style. have you ever felt electric? charged; ionic, or maybe something not so particular; that's the feeling of another connection being made, threads of elastic static woven together on some great unknown loom somewhere -- or maybe just by our own weary fingers.               i digress, in that; this isn't really about any water, or electricity, or some cosmic idea of how we become connected, bound, souls sewn with steel stitches. i guess it's really just about this one thought stuck bouncing around like a plectrum in a sound [hole].            /i could carry your heart, like other writers/ and you're the only one who would appreciate it./
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Dec 13, 2012
Dec 13, 2012 at 1:30 AM UTC
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i've always admired water, its tendency to take the path of least resistance, gently eroding without being openly abrasive. and i've always admired you, though our definition of always seems to differ and the [drip-drop] of (water-clocks) has long since gone out of style. have you ever felt electric? charged; ionic, or maybe something not so particular; that's the feeling of another connection being made, threads of elastic static woven together on some great unknown loom somewhere -- or maybe just by our own weary fingers.               i digress, in that; this isn't really about any water, or electricity, or some cosmic idea of how we become connected, bound, souls sewn with steel stitches. i guess it's really just about this one thought stuck bouncing around like a plectrum in a sound [hole].            /i could carry your heart, like other writers/ and you're the only one who would appreciate it./
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Dec 13, 2012
Dec 13, 2012 at 1:30 AM UTC
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