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I watched the ashes rise, the wood burn, and the fire play I stood there in disbelief that something so gorgeous was standing before me I was taken aback when the flames first burned, I hadn't much to say The crowd stood stunned, the wait was over and I finally felt free Packed and bundled closely, fifteen thousand huddling together Until the fire began to burn strong, keeping us warm in the cold weather No thoughts danced through my mind like they usually would Wonder and silence held my mind captive, as in that moment they could My breath caught a few times and my eyes let one tear run free For what I was looking at was like nothing I thought I'd ever see Now my mind keeps prisoner the memories of that night When the Phoenix kept burning, rising high and so bright
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Dec 11, 2012
Dec 11, 2012 at 10:10 PM UTC
Phoenix
I watched the ashes rise, the wood burn, and the fire play I stood there in disbelief that something so gorgeous was standing before me I was taken aback when the flames first burned, I hadn't much to say The crowd stood stunned, the wait was over and I finally felt free Packed and bundled closely, fifteen thousand huddling together Until the fire began to burn strong, keeping us warm in the cold weather No thoughts danced through my mind like they usually would Wonder and silence held my mind captive, as in that moment they could My breath caught a few times and my eyes let one tear run free For what I was looking at was like nothing I thought I'd ever see Now my mind keeps prisoner the memories of that night When the Phoenix kept burning, rising high and so bright
lindsay-mcavoy
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Dec 11, 2012
Dec 11, 2012 at 10:10 PM UTC
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