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A promise Is when someone vows something to you In order to maintain a temporary trust; A strong Abundant trust. A promise Is when we let that abundance of trust Fill the whole in our hearts where we need reassurance- And like the white whales in the Red Sea, We are resiliently hooked. A promise Is when we are given a hope, Even when we know It's sometimes false. People make promises they can't keep; In our hearts, we all know this to be true. Sometimes false hope is the heart-pumping blood we all need. Red in all its glory; It's our life support. Sometimes a promise cannot be fulfilled, but only vowed- Our involuntary recipients, Harrowing over our grotesque stabs at being their very veins. Like the vows of a marriage, We say them to prove we can provide some sort of air for them; Though as if we live underwater. We give people their air, though it is only a bubble- Just to put in their lovely heads that one day, Maybe they'll get a whole breath.
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Sep 27, 2018
Sep 27, 2018 at 8:59 PM UTC
Why We Break Promises:
A promise Is when someone vows something to you In order to maintain a temporary trust; A strong Abundant trust. A promise Is when we let that abundance of trust Fill the whole in our hearts where we need reassurance- And like the white whales in the Red Sea, We are resiliently hooked. A promise Is when we are given a hope, Even when we know It's sometimes false. People make promises they can't keep; In our hearts, we all know this to be true. Sometimes false hope is the heart-pumping blood we all need. Red in all its glory; It's our life support. Sometimes a promise cannot be fulfilled, but only vowed- Our involuntary recipients, Harrowing over our grotesque stabs at being their very veins. Like the vows of a marriage, We say them to prove we can provide some sort of air for them; Though as if we live underwater. We give people their air, though it is only a bubble- Just to put in their lovely heads that one day, Maybe they'll get a whole breath.
I wrote this out of spite and honestly I love it.
maddie_elle1984
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Sep 27, 2018
Sep 27, 2018 at 8:59 PM UTC
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