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We wrote promises to each other on the backs of our hands, wrote them with sticks in the sand of Lake Burton’s shoreline, wrote them and spoke them and broke them effortlessly. We wore ourselves thin with them, snapping promises like cables until they could no longer hold up our weight and the suspension bridge bridging us came crashing down and even then across the chasm and the gulf we cupped our hands around our mouths and shouted promises at each other until we were too hoarse to say anything at all.
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Dec 9, 2012
Dec 9, 2012 at 11:28 PM UTC
Promises, Promises
We wrote promises to each other on the backs of our hands, wrote them with sticks in the sand of Lake Burton’s shoreline, wrote them and spoke them and broke them effortlessly. We wore ourselves thin with them, snapping promises like cables until they could no longer hold up our weight and the suspension bridge bridging us came crashing down and even then across the chasm and the gulf we cupped our hands around our mouths and shouted promises at each other until we were too hoarse to say anything at all.
Gabriel Gadfly is perfect in all ways
jay-forrest
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Dec 9, 2012
Dec 9, 2012 at 11:28 PM UTC
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