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I've read the letter but I'm not really impressed the words used aren't from the heart expressed. It's very likely an attempt to say what you think rather than what you feel which makes it stink. You haven't seduced me by what you've just said and I will never come around to lay in your bed. I'll remain at a distance to wonder at the thought how anyone could ever with you now be caught. You must say what you feel, mean what you say time passes quickly and moves into another day. When that love in our hearts has fully awakened only then will we know that both of us are taken. We could easily try to find some other reason but the flower of love blossoms in due season. ______________________________
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Sep 22, 2018
Sep 22, 2018 at 12:23 AM UTC
Seductive Words
I've read the letter but I'm not really impressed the words used aren't from the heart expressed. It's very likely an attempt to say what you think rather than what you feel which makes it stink. You haven't seduced me by what you've just said and I will never come around to lay in your bed. I'll remain at a distance to wonder at the thought how anyone could ever with you now be caught. You must say what you feel, mean what you say time passes quickly and moves into another day. When that love in our hearts has fully awakened only then will we know that both of us are taken. We could easily try to find some other reason but the flower of love blossoms in due season. ______________________________
George-Krokos
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74/M/Australian
Sep 22, 2018
Sep 22, 2018 at 12:23 AM UTC
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