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I watched the coal-black smoke of the ancient chimney as it chased a messianic dream swirling up the smoggy expanse to the freedom of the blue sky for a lungful of sanity. I watched the gloom of the soot-smeared boy in tattered khaki as he longed for the dark wings of smoke to take him on its pilgrimage to freedom. Withered by the corrupting fumes of the chimney he lay there. With no hands to hold to the smoke as it spiralled up, with no breath to feel the freedom of the azure sky, he lay there. Like a faint twig feeding the wrath of a funeral pyre he lay there!
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Sep 18, 2018
Sep 18, 2018 at 4:44 AM UTC
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I watched the coal-black smoke of the ancient chimney as it chased a messianic dream swirling up the smoggy expanse to the freedom of the blue sky for a lungful of sanity. I watched the gloom of the soot-smeared boy in tattered khaki as he longed for the dark wings of smoke to take him on its pilgrimage to freedom. Withered by the corrupting fumes of the chimney he lay there. With no hands to hold to the smoke as it spiralled up, with no breath to feel the freedom of the azure sky, he lay there. Like a faint twig feeding the wrath of a funeral pyre he lay there!
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Sep 18, 2018
Sep 18, 2018 at 4:44 AM UTC
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