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It is where I went, when the pubs closed. Just by the bridge was weir, noisy, but I tolerated the river in all her moods. At least, while the effects of the Guinness lingered. There, was a sense of freedom, something I never possessed. Even the driftwood was going somewhere and I not capable of going home. White swans came by when the town slept, cautiously moving on the still pools at the opposite bank. Envious of such serenity, I questioned, their reason, for coming up the Blackwater, when the pubs closed!
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Sep 13, 2018
Sep 13, 2018 at 9:48 AM UTC
River.
It is where I went, when the pubs closed. Just by the bridge was weir, noisy, but I tolerated the river in all her moods. At least, while the effects of the Guinness lingered. There, was a sense of freedom, something I never possessed. Even the driftwood was going somewhere and I not capable of going home. White swans came by when the town slept, cautiously moving on the still pools at the opposite bank. Envious of such serenity, I questioned, their reason, for coming up the Blackwater, when the pubs closed!
The River Blackwater flows through Mallow in County Cork Ireland. It is where I used to go when I was in an opiated stupor after a gallon of Guinness while I was serving my alcoholic apprenticeship in the 70s.
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Sep 13, 2018
Sep 13, 2018 at 9:48 AM UTC
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