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I dove into the water without thinking What the consequences would be while blinking Salt stung my eyes and my vision ceased I could still move my legs and arms at least But I also tried breathing and couldn't Get out of the water, I just wouldn't I thought I saw a treasure at the bottom Pretty, shiny thing that wanted to blossom I went deeper and deeper till I could see it But ended up being too out of reach With disappointment, I reconfigured what to do I looked up but I was trapped where are you My vision finally collapsed and my breath was no longer I was lonely and frightened which gave me time to wonder I blamed you, but it was me, who became this monster.
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Sep 7, 2018
Sep 7, 2018 at 1:20 AM UTC
Frankenstein
I dove into the water without thinking What the consequences would be while blinking Salt stung my eyes and my vision ceased I could still move my legs and arms at least But I also tried breathing and couldn't Get out of the water, I just wouldn't I thought I saw a treasure at the bottom Pretty, shiny thing that wanted to blossom I went deeper and deeper till I could see it But ended up being too out of reach With disappointment, I reconfigured what to do I looked up but I was trapped where are you My vision finally collapsed and my breath was no longer I was lonely and frightened which gave me time to wonder I blamed you, but it was me, who became this monster.
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Sep 7, 2018
Sep 7, 2018 at 1:20 AM UTC
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