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Clouds in shrouds and thoughts aloud Entice you far too soon, For she who thumbs unseemly sums Contributes to the gloom. Chasing pleasures caustic measures Risking all to play, Ensures the visions quick incision Forfeits what you say. For thee, my sweet, this game complete Enhances what you are, To soar so high in crystal sky Emblazons you....a Star! M.
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Aug 30, 2018
Aug 30, 2018 at 2:58 PM UTC
Miss Smiths' near miss
Clouds in shrouds and thoughts aloud Entice you far too soon, For she who thumbs unseemly sums Contributes to the gloom. Chasing pleasures caustic measures Risking all to play, Ensures the visions quick incision Forfeits what you say. For thee, my sweet, this game complete Enhances what you are, To soar so high in crystal sky Emblazons you....a Star! M.
Reaction to Miss J L Smiths' searching little poem "In the Clouds"
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81/M/Australian
Aug 30, 2018
Aug 30, 2018 at 2:58 PM UTC
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