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why keep people in prison for their whole life wasting away when they could be going through mandatory flight training for a one-way trip to deep space who wouldn't want to do that? people would commit felonies just to be chosen; & everyone would understand: like, why did he **** his whole family? - he wanted to go into space; oh.. no volunteers will be accepted: [I've been trying to get into solitary for years, but they won't let me; seems u can't just walk up to a cop & say, I'd like to go to jail please; doesn't work; u might get into the nut house, which is okay for bed rest, narcotics & casual *** but if u want to relax & just read,                     it's annoyingly rigid; solitary confinement would be more spiritual;   isolation, darkness, light, self, emptiness; living inside a stone cube, just meditating; day in day out night after night of pure consciousness - one-way space travel would certainly build character;        if u want to live;        & not self-destruct; the longer u're out there      the more advanced earth technology becomes until one day when u're so far out u can't see the Milky Way, a Space Agent arrives to check up on u  & bring much desired supplies; "What's **** look like now?" "What?" "How much time has passed on earth?" Temporal equation:     the mechanical man speaking in computer code replies: translating light into quanta,    distorting time so the curious prisoner can see in virtual 3D artificial reality; so much time elapsed he can't understand a thing; language purely visual,       people silent; moving    & not moving but drifting in & out,  coming & going;     transient shadows indistinguishable from the    advertising background; back in the comfort of cramped life-support,   wide electronic-data screen windows,    mechanical man implants the virtual reality device all creatures have now;  download completely liberating   the body from mind functioning in its own sphere;         ****** functions taken over by          nanocurcuitry imparting semblance of spacial autonomy, electrified zombies; as one after another pulls his plug.
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Aug 11, 2018
Aug 11, 2018 at 1:44 PM UTC
25-to-space
why keep people in prison for their whole life wasting away when they could be going through mandatory flight training for a one-way trip to deep space who wouldn't want to do that? people would commit felonies just to be chosen; & everyone would understand: like, why did he **** his whole family? - he wanted to go into space; oh.. no volunteers will be accepted: [I've been trying to get into solitary for years, but they won't let me; seems u can't just walk up to a cop & say, I'd like to go to jail please; doesn't work; u might get into the nut house, which is okay for bed rest, narcotics & casual *** but if u want to relax & just read,                     it's annoyingly rigid; solitary confinement would be more spiritual;   isolation, darkness, light, self, emptiness; living inside a stone cube, just meditating; day in day out night after night of pure consciousness - one-way space travel would certainly build character;        if u want to live;        & not self-destruct; the longer u're out there      the more advanced earth technology becomes until one day when u're so far out u can't see the Milky Way, a Space Agent arrives to check up on u  & bring much desired supplies; "What's **** look like now?" "What?" "How much time has passed on earth?" Temporal equation:     the mechanical man speaking in computer code replies: translating light into quanta,    distorting time so the curious prisoner can see in virtual 3D artificial reality; so much time elapsed he can't understand a thing; language purely visual,       people silent; moving    & not moving but drifting in & out,  coming & going;     transient shadows indistinguishable from the    advertising background; back in the comfort of cramped life-support,   wide electronic-data screen windows,    mechanical man implants the virtual reality device all creatures have now;  download completely liberating   the body from mind functioning in its own sphere;         ****** functions taken over by          nanocurcuitry imparting semblance of spacial autonomy, electrified zombies; as one after another pulls his plug.
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Aug 11, 2018
Aug 11, 2018 at 1:44 PM UTC
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