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The early morning mist drifts silently across  the freshly ploughed and seeded fields,  from one ridge to the next hopping birds are seeking their routine day-break feast. Along the lane pressed in tarmac the carrion is being picked apart by hungry crows  who also keep a watchful eye  for speeding traffic and hunting foxes. The dawns early sunshine starts slowly  burning away the mist and in nearby fields  the blood red poppies awake and stand tall on their green and strong supporting stems... but in these green fields of times long past the mist was smoke and gas, the furrows craters, the seeds were shells and the crows were rats as big as cats and the carrion was  the Johns, the Daves, the Jims and Jacks...
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Aug 11, 2018
Aug 11, 2018 at 12:05 PM UTC
Carrion
The early morning mist drifts silently across  the freshly ploughed and seeded fields,  from one ridge to the next hopping birds are seeking their routine day-break feast. Along the lane pressed in tarmac the carrion is being picked apart by hungry crows  who also keep a watchful eye  for speeding traffic and hunting foxes. The dawns early sunshine starts slowly  burning away the mist and in nearby fields  the blood red poppies awake and stand tall on their green and strong supporting stems... but in these green fields of times long past the mist was smoke and gas, the furrows craters, the seeds were shells and the crows were rats as big as cats and the carrion was  the Johns, the Daves, the Jims and Jacks...
peter-thomas-balch
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Aug 11, 2018
Aug 11, 2018 at 12:05 PM UTC
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