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Not too sure where my mind is. I seem to be losing my self. Thoughts running in free verse, Thots running in reverse. I'm sorry I can't help my self. Like I said I'm sorry, I, really can't help my self Losing everyone else. I see now it's just me, I'm toxic. Boy. Like you said it's not rocket Science it makes sense. I get how you feel. But what tense are we in? Is It something i did or you think I'll do? I'm confused. Removing my self from y'alls situation. Losing people seems to be habituation. Feelings burn in recreation. Feelings burn for re-creation. But it's not about the rhyme. Literary rules meant to be broken. Though when I'm free is when I find The worst times. -Luca Ivaldi
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Aug 10, 2018
Aug 10, 2018 at 2:03 AM UTC
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Not too sure where my mind is. I seem to be losing my self. Thoughts running in free verse, Thots running in reverse. I'm sorry I can't help my self. Like I said I'm sorry, I, really can't help my self Losing everyone else. I see now it's just me, I'm toxic. Boy. Like you said it's not rocket Science it makes sense. I get how you feel. But what tense are we in? Is It something i did or you think I'll do? I'm confused. Removing my self from y'alls situation. Losing people seems to be habituation. Feelings burn in recreation. Feelings burn for re-creation. But it's not about the rhyme. Literary rules meant to be broken. Though when I'm free is when I find The worst times. -Luca Ivaldi
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Jesse_Nakai
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27/M/Texas
Aug 10, 2018
Aug 10, 2018 at 2:03 AM UTC
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