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I don't see why love is compared to spring. It's nothing new. If anything, love would be autumn: The slow sense of losing yourself, The mixed signals to go with the weather, The way you shed the layers of your words so that the bare bones of truth become vulnerable to the cold, and the leaves of every syllable lay motionless on the ground.
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Nov 22, 2012
Nov 22, 2012 at 1:31 AM UTC
more of an autumn.
I don't see why love is compared to spring. It's nothing new. If anything, love would be autumn: The slow sense of losing yourself, The mixed signals to go with the weather, The way you shed the layers of your words so that the bare bones of truth become vulnerable to the cold, and the leaves of every syllable lay motionless on the ground.
rosie-ninesling
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Nov 22, 2012
Nov 22, 2012 at 1:31 AM UTC
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