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The flags once whipped in the wind thrown about by turmoil's teeth while the motion caused concern there was guidance in what was felt surety in direction’s lead first to west and then to east this was the past once confirmed by sightings that tugged the heart the fraying began in plain sight subtle to those who watched the signs inconsequential by small measure until the damage took its toil the banners began to fail as the colors fade away threads lost to the savage gusts diminished streamers no longer whole storms lost their hold on the world this was the lie of vision’s source when indicators became mute implying quiet instead of strife hurricanes may be present scourging souls without mercy while the flags no longer wave missing from their lofty perch. © 2018. Sean Green. All Rights Reserved. 20180710.
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Jul 10, 2018
Jul 10, 2018 at 8:29 PM UTC
Banners Fail
The flags once whipped in the wind thrown about by turmoil's teeth while the motion caused concern there was guidance in what was felt surety in direction’s lead first to west and then to east this was the past once confirmed by sightings that tugged the heart the fraying began in plain sight subtle to those who watched the signs inconsequential by small measure until the damage took its toil the banners began to fail as the colors fade away threads lost to the savage gusts diminished streamers no longer whole storms lost their hold on the world this was the lie of vision’s source when indicators became mute implying quiet instead of strife hurricanes may be present scourging souls without mercy while the flags no longer wave missing from their lofty perch. © 2018. Sean Green. All Rights Reserved. 20180710.
The poem “Banners Fail” is about the abrasive nature of depression. Sufferers may eventually quiet down, implying all is well, when it is very much not OK.
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60/F/Pickens SC
Jul 10, 2018
Jul 10, 2018 at 8:29 PM UTC
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