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Do cars feel pain? Is it possible To look at a car, And determine, based on how it sits If it's aching? Is it possible To look at a person, And determine, based on how they stand If they're upset? Cars hide emotion. Some may see an angry face When staring down a coupé, But it never shows it's true colors. People hide emotion. Some may hear angry yelling When walking past a garden, But that person is truly broken. Eventually, every car breaks down. And after a while, it will show it's emotion And it will open up to the elements And the mercy of mother nature. Eventually, every person breaks. After a while, they will show their colors And they will open up to someone And their gavels of judgement. Once a car is broken down, It shows it's emotion And is forever eternal in that way. Once a person is broken, They show their emotion But may be nudged The right way.
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Jul 5, 2018
Jul 5, 2018 at 11:15 PM UTC
Broken Down Car
Do cars feel pain? Is it possible To look at a car, And determine, based on how it sits If it's aching? Is it possible To look at a person, And determine, based on how they stand If they're upset? Cars hide emotion. Some may see an angry face When staring down a coupé, But it never shows it's true colors. People hide emotion. Some may hear angry yelling When walking past a garden, But that person is truly broken. Eventually, every car breaks down. And after a while, it will show it's emotion And it will open up to the elements And the mercy of mother nature. Eventually, every person breaks. After a while, they will show their colors And they will open up to someone And their gavels of judgement. Once a car is broken down, It shows it's emotion And is forever eternal in that way. Once a person is broken, They show their emotion But may be nudged The right way.
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Jul 5, 2018
Jul 5, 2018 at 11:15 PM UTC
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