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i have forgotten to linger  in love  with you in a past life wanting only  to be found worthy  of your affection revere your touch as holy like goosebumps  in the italian sun to write melodies and ballads and captions not of purity, not of beauty but of how you make me feel forget all the rest all the fighting all the ugly all the words we didn’t mean for i am ill  when you are not around and it is poetic enough that you are broken  yet you are what makes me whole
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Jul 2, 2018
Jul 2, 2018 at 4:41 PM UTC
st. christopher
i have forgotten to linger  in love  with you in a past life wanting only  to be found worthy  of your affection revere your touch as holy like goosebumps  in the italian sun to write melodies and ballads and captions not of purity, not of beauty but of how you make me feel forget all the rest all the fighting all the ugly all the words we didn’t mean for i am ill  when you are not around and it is poetic enough that you are broken  yet you are what makes me whole
seeking feedback on this one! not sure if the ending hits quite like i'd like it to. open to critiques/advice. thank you x
madisen
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Jul 2, 2018
Jul 2, 2018 at 4:41 PM UTC
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