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i so wish these poems weren't such afterthoughts, words either labored, squeezed off a pained heart, or a strong gush of stupid happy emotion as in farts? neither pretty codified sonnets with essence in parts, nor crisp, concise haiku's focused like targeted darts, not the sophistried zen, oft hacked philosophic verses, and the petty patterned words unmovingly affecting, i despair for us to read a poem from brains turmoiled, confused,unwritten words,unexpressed feelings,in divine madness!! dance the unknown poem if a poem, to music uncomposed if music, why cant we live them **** poems! so we dont have to **** write them!! -every fellow being is a poem unwritten I feel, lets live them? Can we?-
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Nov 13, 2012
Nov 13, 2012 at 1:46 PM UTC
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i so wish these poems weren't such afterthoughts, words either labored, squeezed off a pained heart, or a strong gush of stupid happy emotion as in farts? neither pretty codified sonnets with essence in parts, nor crisp, concise haiku's focused like targeted darts, not the sophistried zen, oft hacked philosophic verses, and the petty patterned words unmovingly affecting, i despair for us to read a poem from brains turmoiled, confused,unwritten words,unexpressed feelings,in divine madness!! dance the unknown poem if a poem, to music uncomposed if music, why cant we live them **** poems! so we dont have to **** write them!! -every fellow being is a poem unwritten I feel, lets live them? Can we?-
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Nov 13, 2012
Nov 13, 2012 at 1:46 PM UTC
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