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Moon gently shines as the river flows free And I hold my breath as the sunshine of stars morphs into the Heaven's gate The grass waves with the lake's slumber as the leaves fall and drifts soft and slow And I dream of the treasure trove of Spring And so it starts, the swing of Lanterns So smooth as the winds begin to howl Spring will blossom on the morrow Let the Fall spread in silence And the night covers all I need the refuge that silent hush the cool night, feathers drift
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Jun 30, 2018
Jun 30, 2018 at 12:14 PM UTC
Etheree of Dreams
Moon gently shines as the river flows free And I hold my breath as the sunshine of stars morphs into the Heaven's gate The grass waves with the lake's slumber as the leaves fall and drifts soft and slow And I dream of the treasure trove of Spring And so it starts, the swing of Lanterns So smooth as the winds begin to howl Spring will blossom on the morrow Let the Fall spread in silence And the night covers all I need the refuge that silent hush the cool night, feathers drift
Heads feeling better now! After having a lovely talk with Robin about HP and experimenting with different poem styles, I decided to do something new! This form of poetry is called an 'Etheree', 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. I remember doing these as a warm-up in uni. What I did here was a Double Etheree, so it goes 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 syllable-wise! I've got more poems on the way so thank you everyone! 109 followers. Man, my love for you and HP grows! Seriously, you guys are fricking amazing! Thank you ever so! ^-^ Hope you like it! Be back soon! Lyn ***
Lyn-Purcell
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28/F/United Kingdom
Jun 30, 2018
Jun 30, 2018 at 12:14 PM UTC
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