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Carbon is pummled for endless hours, Chambers filled with all our might, Cracks that erode while others soured, Hope to press a diamond, When the world will give us ours, To merge and stretch and stay a while Those sparkling, timeless hours
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Jun 26, 2018
Jun 26, 2018 at 6:57 PM UTC
Diamond Hours
Carbon is pummled for endless hours, Chambers filled with all our might, Cracks that erode while others soured, Hope to press a diamond, When the world will give us ours, To merge and stretch and stay a while Those sparkling, timeless hours
This Poem is about long distance love. The pressure and stress of not being near the person you love is so immensely and powerful natural force that when you do meet your lover each hour becomes that more timeless. Each of us is a mountain of forces hoping to merge for as long as possible and press those diamonds. e.g. Our two mountain ranges are Intertwined and trace the oldest story on the earth. Like all, we were born of magma, wind and surf, we look and feel together but seldom touch and old bodies of mortal things petrify underneath our brave and glossy faces.
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28/M/London
Jun 26, 2018
Jun 26, 2018 at 6:57 PM UTC
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