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Upon waves of confusion a bottle rides in bounded and wrapped with a tattered sleeve dancing atop the white caps and kissing anger good-bye far from shore maybe a month or so out and apart for the text written, sealed, and sent neither can say it did something wrong hurtful and unknown the bottle rode the sea letting the sleeve take the damage ripped, shredded, and frayed protecting the most dear this bland bottle though mean and unthoughtful had a message both a sentence and a feeling to be unraveled by the owner of this angel like cloth
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Mar 27, 2010
Mar 27, 2010 at 1:18 PM UTC
A Note In A Bottle
Upon waves of confusion a bottle rides in bounded and wrapped with a tattered sleeve dancing atop the white caps and kissing anger good-bye far from shore maybe a month or so out and apart for the text written, sealed, and sent neither can say it did something wrong hurtful and unknown the bottle rode the sea letting the sleeve take the damage ripped, shredded, and frayed protecting the most dear this bland bottle though mean and unthoughtful had a message both a sentence and a feeling to be unraveled by the owner of this angel like cloth
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Mar 27, 2010
Mar 27, 2010 at 1:18 PM UTC
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