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Ravens dance upon highwires. Flashing pinwheels spinning in their beaks. The merry-go-round grinds, Its rusted gears, squealing into the wind. Book pages whirl and fly off into the sky. The fox’s cry to the butterfly Went unheard in this whitewashed night.
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Jun 22, 2018
Jun 22, 2018 at 11:44 PM UTC
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Ravens dance upon highwires. Flashing pinwheels spinning in their beaks. The merry-go-round grinds, Its rusted gears, squealing into the wind. Book pages whirl and fly off into the sky. The fox’s cry to the butterfly Went unheard in this whitewashed night.
Probably going to end up re-writing this for a fourth time, but for now it's good enough to post on here and see what kind of feed back I get for it.
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28/F/Vermont
Jun 22, 2018
Jun 22, 2018 at 11:44 PM UTC
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