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Hello Poetry; we meet again my bored, unenthusiastic but sympathetic friend Why is it you never seem to like what I do? The rhymes, the rhythm structure, the ideas I write for you? Or maybe, in my haste, maybe I've miscalculated Maybe, it's actually me that feels discombobulated I have had times when I've struggled with what I've written I always die a thousands deaths, before I'm smitten with how I might have dotted the i's, and crossed the t's I'll hide behind furniture to be sure that no one sees lest they lambast my catastrophic grasp on diction With god's help I'm sure I'll conquer this terrible affliction and actually construct a poem I'm happy with Here are the laws, I'll live by, forthwith, 1. don't write about your pet hamster, no one cares 2. and you should probably steer clear of international affairs 3. remember no word in the English language rhymes with 'month' 4. 5. always know your subject, inside and out 6. Do weasels have noses, or do they have snouts.....? **** you can't even write out a set of rules You; You have no friend in anyone that won't suffer fools gladly, but sadly, I have another idea another lacklustre shot at being sincere I hate this vicious cycle, hate every single bit but yep, I'll get my pencil, grab some paper, then just sit
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Nov 14, 2012
Nov 14, 2012 at 8:09 AM UTC
Hello Poetry
Hello Poetry; we meet again my bored, unenthusiastic but sympathetic friend Why is it you never seem to like what I do? The rhymes, the rhythm structure, the ideas I write for you? Or maybe, in my haste, maybe I've miscalculated Maybe, it's actually me that feels discombobulated I have had times when I've struggled with what I've written I always die a thousands deaths, before I'm smitten with how I might have dotted the i's, and crossed the t's I'll hide behind furniture to be sure that no one sees lest they lambast my catastrophic grasp on diction With god's help I'm sure I'll conquer this terrible affliction and actually construct a poem I'm happy with Here are the laws, I'll live by, forthwith, 1. don't write about your pet hamster, no one cares 2. and you should probably steer clear of international affairs 3. remember no word in the English language rhymes with 'month' 4. 5. always know your subject, inside and out 6. Do weasels have noses, or do they have snouts.....? **** you can't even write out a set of rules You; You have no friend in anyone that won't suffer fools gladly, but sadly, I have another idea another lacklustre shot at being sincere I hate this vicious cycle, hate every single bit but yep, I'll get my pencil, grab some paper, then just sit
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Nov 14, 2012
Nov 14, 2012 at 8:09 AM UTC
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