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Travel under the eastern sky keep your eyes on the road, do not ask why that barren landscape, the color of rye makes the hardened townspeople cry. Legend states that the dusty flatland was a servant to the sun so grand the sun demanded amusement from the land and the land created the dance of the sand. The sand would fly throughout the desert space for the sun to bestow her grace. The act would make a storm and erase any proof of fate and leave no trace. The townspeople never spoke of the event, but you must know what happened to an extent when small ones run away at the advent of these storms, the sands erase all torment. You must vow to not wander from the road when the sands hear the sun's lovely ode and feel the need for a storm to explode to dance and bury us all, as the sun foretold.
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Aug 14, 2018
Aug 14, 2018 at 10:02 PM UTC
Forgotten Vow(el)s: No 'I'
Travel under the eastern sky keep your eyes on the road, do not ask why that barren landscape, the color of rye makes the hardened townspeople cry. Legend states that the dusty flatland was a servant to the sun so grand the sun demanded amusement from the land and the land created the dance of the sand. The sand would fly throughout the desert space for the sun to bestow her grace. The act would make a storm and erase any proof of fate and leave no trace. The townspeople never spoke of the event, but you must know what happened to an extent when small ones run away at the advent of these storms, the sands erase all torment. You must vow to not wander from the road when the sands hear the sun's lovely ode and feel the need for a storm to explode to dance and bury us all, as the sun foretold.
© Tatiana Hey hey I actually wrote this one before my concussion so with a couple of edits (and after much rest) i'm ready to post it. A part of me feels like there is an 'I' somewhere in here, but I'm fairly certain there isn't. I think my use of sounds that sound like 'I' are confusing me lol. No 'O' is next.
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27/F/American
Aug 14, 2018
Aug 14, 2018 at 10:02 PM UTC
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