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Can't **** what isn't alive or bring to life what's dead gotta just live, and survive keeping your wits, and your head Severely precious and few with soul and heart are the brave knowing just what too do nobodies lackey, or slave Talley the marks of the strong tightening the reins and the nerves playing the game, way to long drawing on deepest reserves When every moment is precious and every scar has it's mark listening attentive the chorus every dog has it's day and it's bark
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Jun 19, 2018
Jun 19, 2018 at 11:23 AM UTC
Dog day afternoon
Can't **** what isn't alive or bring to life what's dead gotta just live, and survive keeping your wits, and your head Severely precious and few with soul and heart are the brave knowing just what too do nobodies lackey, or slave Talley the marks of the strong tightening the reins and the nerves playing the game, way to long drawing on deepest reserves When every moment is precious and every scar has it's mark listening attentive the chorus every dog has it's day and it's bark
Woof woof woof, actually posted this on another site (some minor alters for here), too see what it "ranked": Autorank: Total 1.0, professional similarity 2 (of 10), concrete vs abstract 0 (of 2), noun/verb/etc order 1.0 (of 1), cliches -2 (of -3) So apparently, it is very rank LOL ;D~
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Jun 19, 2018
Jun 19, 2018 at 11:23 AM UTC
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