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~  ❀    ✾    ❀ ~          My heart will bloom like a lotus                          under the summer sun      My petals kissed by passion flames              a languid breeze strokes my lips         The mouth to my heart opens from              mud waters as a crown in light ~  ❀    ✾    ❀ ~
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Jun 14, 2018
Jun 14, 2018 at 2:33 PM UTC
❀✾ Inner Lotus ✾❀
~  ❀    ✾    ❀ ~          My heart will bloom like a lotus                          under the summer sun      My petals kissed by passion flames              a languid breeze strokes my lips         The mouth to my heart opens from              mud waters as a crown in light ~  ❀    ✾    ❀ ~
The inspiration continues! I have more Lantern poems in the works, but this is another form of poetry I enjoyed! This is a Sijo, a fabulously short musical lyric practices by Korean poets, to whom it is dedicated! ^-^ Information for Sijo poems is here - go to slide 7&8 (https://www.slideserve.com/debbie/poetry-types-part-two) Each line has be 14-16 syllables resulting a grand total of 44-46 syllables. Mine is 14-15-16 syllable line by line with a total of 45! I swear, my love for East Asia continues to grow. It's giving me such a buzz! ~ ❀ ✾ ❀ ~ I'll definitely do more Sijo poems and Lantern poems! Be back soon! Lyn ** © '❀✾ Inner Lotus ✾❀' by Lyn-Purcell
Lyn-Purcell
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28/F/United Kingdom
Jun 14, 2018
Jun 14, 2018 at 2:33 PM UTC
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