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I trekked a trail in a grimy wood, Pursuing destiny, fate behind me stood I hummed a tune of great remorse And ruminated a late divorce Then I found a man in a half-burned astronaut suit The lining was charred, he only had one boot No ship near, no crew—a sole soul Lying in the middle of a crater; a grain of rice in a salad bowl He spoke to me through strained speech, Telling secrets geniuses wish to teach He said the stars of dreams were within his reach But the bounds of worlds are ones men cannot breach This astronaut Had his suit tied with barely an Ashley knot I’d just shipwrecked, floated ashore at half a knot I asked him to tell of his ship, he said “I’d rather not” But his tongue had no fetter To quell his grand eloquence, for worse or for better Nebulas in the wind, Spires on the moon, Galaxies in the horizon... He muttered of such as though humming a tune As I sighed a breath of great remorse And contemplated the great divorce He pulled a smile then grabbed my hand And said, “The future is the greatest land.” I tried, I tried to stay by his side, But my every insistence was denied He commanded to be left to roam The lands and worlds that he called “home” But never has it left my mind; My only encounter of this kind To this day I don’t know if they were things he’d seen Or fancy thrills he had dreamed But I’ve never known a mind so keen To make fables real as his words seemed And since that day I’ve sought to find The experiential treasures he had mined See, never has it left my mind, That day my near-death was left behind Yes, never has it left my mind Because he illumined the darkened eyes of mine Or perhaps it has never left my mind Because when I found him He was blind.
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Jun 3, 2018
Jun 3, 2018 at 12:40 PM UTC
Space to Dream
I trekked a trail in a grimy wood, Pursuing destiny, fate behind me stood I hummed a tune of great remorse And ruminated a late divorce Then I found a man in a half-burned astronaut suit The lining was charred, he only had one boot No ship near, no crew—a sole soul Lying in the middle of a crater; a grain of rice in a salad bowl He spoke to me through strained speech, Telling secrets geniuses wish to teach He said the stars of dreams were within his reach But the bounds of worlds are ones men cannot breach This astronaut Had his suit tied with barely an Ashley knot I’d just shipwrecked, floated ashore at half a knot I asked him to tell of his ship, he said “I’d rather not” But his tongue had no fetter To quell his grand eloquence, for worse or for better Nebulas in the wind, Spires on the moon, Galaxies in the horizon... He muttered of such as though humming a tune As I sighed a breath of great remorse And contemplated the great divorce He pulled a smile then grabbed my hand And said, “The future is the greatest land.” I tried, I tried to stay by his side, But my every insistence was denied He commanded to be left to roam The lands and worlds that he called “home” But never has it left my mind; My only encounter of this kind To this day I don’t know if they were things he’d seen Or fancy thrills he had dreamed But I’ve never known a mind so keen To make fables real as his words seemed And since that day I’ve sought to find The experiential treasures he had mined See, never has it left my mind, That day my near-death was left behind Yes, never has it left my mind Because he illumined the darkened eyes of mine Or perhaps it has never left my mind Because when I found him He was blind.
(“Late divorce” refers to never getting married in order to avoid a likely divorce later in life. “The great divorce” refers to the CS Lewis classic & the prevailing concept therein.)
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Jun 3, 2018
Jun 3, 2018 at 12:40 PM UTC
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