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Its the flame that dies which is reckless to hearts, an aching burn that awaits peaceful sleep. But eyes cannot shut and hearts cannot heal as the flame no longer flickers. When did that familiar burn leave? When betrayal became its motive; to abandon its wick of sturdy compassion for something of foreign smoke. And forever shall that flame live in guilt as its sturdy wick shall falter; and fall into a dark abyss of a light without its flicker. That scented aroma that once was sweet is now bitter and choked forever. The foreign smoke overcomes all light and pollutes the scented quiver. Yet soon that smoke shall be blown! As the wick begins to rise; and that feeble flame shall light again to banish foreign cries; "In hope I raise my tarnished light against your betrayal and pain and soon I shall burn like my sister the sun and never stray again!" Eyes may shut Hearts may heal. My eyes will shut Our hearts might heal.
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Nov 2, 2012
Nov 2, 2012 at 7:10 PM UTC
Betrayal?
Its the flame that dies which is reckless to hearts, an aching burn that awaits peaceful sleep. But eyes cannot shut and hearts cannot heal as the flame no longer flickers. When did that familiar burn leave? When betrayal became its motive; to abandon its wick of sturdy compassion for something of foreign smoke. And forever shall that flame live in guilt as its sturdy wick shall falter; and fall into a dark abyss of a light without its flicker. That scented aroma that once was sweet is now bitter and choked forever. The foreign smoke overcomes all light and pollutes the scented quiver. Yet soon that smoke shall be blown! As the wick begins to rise; and that feeble flame shall light again to banish foreign cries; "In hope I raise my tarnished light against your betrayal and pain and soon I shall burn like my sister the sun and never stray again!" Eyes may shut Hearts may heal. My eyes will shut Our hearts might heal.
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Nov 2, 2012
Nov 2, 2012 at 7:10 PM UTC
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