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Under the train station from across the road one musty midnight after a late dinner, I saw him. He was alone. He watched jeepneys pass by. He stared at the road. He remained still when the other workers walked past him. He held a 7-up or maybe a Mountain Dew by the bottleneck & brought it to his lips to drink. He was sitting on a stool too small for him & so his legs were spread open. He put his free hand on his knee, in between fingers an almost finished cigarette. His work suspenders glowed under the plastic fluorescent light of Althea’s burger shop, & beneath he wore a red shirt that fastened his torso tight. When it was time to ride my jeepney home, I looked at him for a moment before getting on, & it could be that he looked right back. When we moved forward I tried looking again but saw he was looking somewhere else. Manila, 2018
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May 28, 2018
May 28, 2018 at 9:57 AM UTC
Tayuman Midnight Hour
Under the train station from across the road one musty midnight after a late dinner, I saw him. He was alone. He watched jeepneys pass by. He stared at the road. He remained still when the other workers walked past him. He held a 7-up or maybe a Mountain Dew by the bottleneck & brought it to his lips to drink. He was sitting on a stool too small for him & so his legs were spread open. He put his free hand on his knee, in between fingers an almost finished cigarette. His work suspenders glowed under the plastic fluorescent light of Althea’s burger shop, & beneath he wore a red shirt that fastened his torso tight. When it was time to ride my jeepney home, I looked at him for a moment before getting on, & it could be that he looked right back. When we moved forward I tried looking again but saw he was looking somewhere else. Manila, 2018
Blatantly modelled after Allen Ginsberg's "The Bricklayer’s Lunch Hour" because it is pure genius.
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26/Manila
May 28, 2018
May 28, 2018 at 9:57 AM UTC
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