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Christine hated Saturdays on the locked ward the day her fiancé jilted her at the altar the ***** music playing in the background the flowers the aisle carpeted with that pattern she will always remember and as you saw her across the way looking out the window you saw Eric the day kid who was brought in while his mother worked was aggravating her was poking her in the back and you saw red and went and pushed him away and that brought the male nurses over and they stood between you both and Eric glared at you and the big nurse said what’s going on here? and Eric said it’s him he pushed me and Christine said Eric was poking me and Benedict was just keeping him away well calm down now the fat nurse said keep it cool and so you and Christine walked to another window and peered out at the snow and she said the creep as if we haven’t enough to cope with without   that creep aggravating us but thanks anyway for keeping him away and you said that’s ok he gets to me too I’ll bop him one of these days when the nurses aren’t looking and she smiled and said let me know when I wouldn’t want to miss that and you looked out at the falling snow that was settling on the fields and tree tops and far off you saw a tractor moving over the ground and seagulls were following behind and she said quite picturesque isn’t it? Yes you said kind of Christmas cardy yes she said taking your hand I wonder if we’ll be out of here before then? and you felt kind of numb as if maybe the whole world had gone black and the snow fell and you squeezed her hand sensing the warm flesh and her thumb rubbed against yours and behind you the unlocking and locking of doors.
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Oct 26, 2012
Oct 26, 2012 at 2:57 AM UTC
HATING SATURDAY
Christine hated Saturdays on the locked ward the day her fiancé jilted her at the altar the ***** music playing in the background the flowers the aisle carpeted with that pattern she will always remember and as you saw her across the way looking out the window you saw Eric the day kid who was brought in while his mother worked was aggravating her was poking her in the back and you saw red and went and pushed him away and that brought the male nurses over and they stood between you both and Eric glared at you and the big nurse said what’s going on here? and Eric said it’s him he pushed me and Christine said Eric was poking me and Benedict was just keeping him away well calm down now the fat nurse said keep it cool and so you and Christine walked to another window and peered out at the snow and she said the creep as if we haven’t enough to cope with without   that creep aggravating us but thanks anyway for keeping him away and you said that’s ok he gets to me too I’ll bop him one of these days when the nurses aren’t looking and she smiled and said let me know when I wouldn’t want to miss that and you looked out at the falling snow that was settling on the fields and tree tops and far off you saw a tractor moving over the ground and seagulls were following behind and she said quite picturesque isn’t it? Yes you said kind of Christmas cardy yes she said taking your hand I wonder if we’ll be out of here before then? and you felt kind of numb as if maybe the whole world had gone black and the snow fell and you squeezed her hand sensing the warm flesh and her thumb rubbed against yours and behind you the unlocking and locking of doors.
terry-collett
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Oct 26, 2012
Oct 26, 2012 at 2:57 AM UTC
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