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A bright, shining, feeling, this girl, leaves me reeling. All the cards she’s been dealing, the pain, it’s been healing. Little by little, I become new. The sky above, shines so blue. Our love is pure and true, i’m stuck to her like glue. Yet, one day, the sky turns gray. It was a horrible day. For the doctor showed her her way, she was not to be here for much longer. Why she did, I don’t know why, but looking back it makes me cry. She decided to tell a lie, telling me “everything would be fine.” The days passed by so fast, I didn’t know they wouldn’t last. If only she told me the truth, if only i’d known she was dying. Finally, the time came, she couldn’t hide. Just like that, I was swept by the tide. My world drowned with tears, the woman I wanted to marry, was already taken. Her name written on death’s note, my love faded like the seconds. Holding her hand, I felt her warmth, I held it till that warmth was lost.
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May 8, 2018
May 8, 2018 at 3:35 PM UTC
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A bright, shining, feeling, this girl, leaves me reeling. All the cards she’s been dealing, the pain, it’s been healing. Little by little, I become new. The sky above, shines so blue. Our love is pure and true, i’m stuck to her like glue. Yet, one day, the sky turns gray. It was a horrible day. For the doctor showed her her way, she was not to be here for much longer. Why she did, I don’t know why, but looking back it makes me cry. She decided to tell a lie, telling me “everything would be fine.” The days passed by so fast, I didn’t know they wouldn’t last. If only she told me the truth, if only i’d known she was dying. Finally, the time came, she couldn’t hide. Just like that, I was swept by the tide. My world drowned with tears, the woman I wanted to marry, was already taken. Her name written on death’s note, my love faded like the seconds. Holding her hand, I felt her warmth, I held it till that warmth was lost.
SPOILER ALERT: The ending rhyme is the rhythm of her heartbeat as the poem progresses.
DarkMage3099
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May 8, 2018
May 8, 2018 at 3:35 PM UTC
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