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O Brian, Why are you in despair? The sun still shines behind the clouds And you still inhale air. O Brian, Your life is in strife; Despair your partner, Exhaustion your wife. O Brian, What can you do? Your efforts are empty, The old still vanquishes the new. O Brian, Brian, Where’s your support? Do you have friends? Someone to court? O Brian, Your thoughts are confused; One idea opposes another, You are being used. O Brian, Brian, Take a breath; Before you wear out And collapse in death. O Brian, Brian, If anything is a guide, Let it be unbounding Until on true freedom you glide!
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May 6, 2018
May 6, 2018 at 1:39 PM UTC
O[']Brian
O Brian, Why are you in despair? The sun still shines behind the clouds And you still inhale air. O Brian, Your life is in strife; Despair your partner, Exhaustion your wife. O Brian, What can you do? Your efforts are empty, The old still vanquishes the new. O Brian, Brian, Where’s your support? Do you have friends? Someone to court? O Brian, Your thoughts are confused; One idea opposes another, You are being used. O Brian, Brian, Take a breath; Before you wear out And collapse in death. O Brian, Brian, If anything is a guide, Let it be unbounding Until on true freedom you glide!
At least this is a third-person self portrayal lol.
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27/M/West Virginia
May 6, 2018
May 6, 2018 at 1:39 PM UTC
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