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Doesn't it call, so sweetly, The promise of eternal sleep of mindless silence of distant grief It calls and slithers in deep Then it calls from within When the pressure overtakes That song plays in the back destitute tunes of drowsy deaths That arrive unannounced and lack Any fault whatsoever Intrusive thoughts peek through broken minds a crashed car a step         off A laugh so twisted it pains afterthought Do we live with it? With that choice Suffering through in silence
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May 2, 2018
May 2, 2018 at 6:05 AM UTC
Life before Death
Doesn't it call, so sweetly, The promise of eternal sleep of mindless silence of distant grief It calls and slithers in deep Then it calls from within When the pressure overtakes That song plays in the back destitute tunes of drowsy deaths That arrive unannounced and lack Any fault whatsoever Intrusive thoughts peek through broken minds a crashed car a step         off A laugh so twisted it pains afterthought Do we live with it? With that choice Suffering through in silence
Title from Brandon Sanderson's Immortal Words
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May 2, 2018
May 2, 2018 at 6:05 AM UTC
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