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I suppose I shouldn't be surprised how much cleaner the air breathes up here compared to the stale, stank fog back down in the little city we shared. —A thought: I barely recall the specific stench, an ever-present detail in what was my day-to-day existence. However, your words, complaints, ideas: "Like a diaper full of death" you said once, exactly, play in my head like a tape recorder, old and warped a little, but undoubtedly accurate.— And now, am I looking down on you? Or down at you? Over you? Is that you, floating place to place, living on a moment like a speck of dust, never entirely within anyone's grasp? Are you still toiling in the burning sun, harvesting what you planted, growing it strong and right? What movements are these? You live and toil and burn your fuel and spend it all each day and earn it back again. Oh, if you could join me! No, if only I could join you. I would toil, burn and spend everything to find a way so you could breathe, too, this new air. The air... Sweeter each moment, but thin, unfit. My head either aches or... it does not feel at all. Do you look up at me? Up to me? Up...over me? And what now have I got to look up to? A gust blows the speck away, gone elsewhere, never to stay.
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Oct 16, 2012
Oct 16, 2012 at 9:29 PM UTC
An Aerial View
I suppose I shouldn't be surprised how much cleaner the air breathes up here compared to the stale, stank fog back down in the little city we shared. —A thought: I barely recall the specific stench, an ever-present detail in what was my day-to-day existence. However, your words, complaints, ideas: "Like a diaper full of death" you said once, exactly, play in my head like a tape recorder, old and warped a little, but undoubtedly accurate.— And now, am I looking down on you? Or down at you? Over you? Is that you, floating place to place, living on a moment like a speck of dust, never entirely within anyone's grasp? Are you still toiling in the burning sun, harvesting what you planted, growing it strong and right? What movements are these? You live and toil and burn your fuel and spend it all each day and earn it back again. Oh, if you could join me! No, if only I could join you. I would toil, burn and spend everything to find a way so you could breathe, too, this new air. The air... Sweeter each moment, but thin, unfit. My head either aches or... it does not feel at all. Do you look up at me? Up to me? Up...over me? And what now have I got to look up to? A gust blows the speck away, gone elsewhere, never to stay.
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Oct 16, 2012
Oct 16, 2012 at 9:29 PM UTC
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