No second chances!
Once the deed is done,
No changes!
Do only deeds of love and respect.
Elsewise, It may cause regret.
Once done, the effects remain forever,
What's left? A memory to disect.
There are no do-overs.
So be sure of the effects!
Oct 13, 2012
Oct 13, 2012 at 11:41 PM UTC
No second chances!
Once the deed is done,
No changes!
Do only deeds of love and respect.
Elsewise, It may cause regret.
Once done, the effects remain forever,
What's left? A memory to disect.
There are no do-overs.
So be sure of the effects!
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