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You used to be a lamp to nightly eyes,        You are a star right now, You used to be a rose so fine and nice,         Where is that flower-brow? You have become a woman, proud and pretty,         Just like a crownless queen, I cannot blame your growth and change and ties,         You never had a vow.
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Apr 18, 2018
Apr 18, 2018 at 1:08 PM UTC
The Past of a Star
You used to be a lamp to nightly eyes,        You are a star right now, You used to be a rose so fine and nice,         Where is that flower-brow? You have become a woman, proud and pretty,         Just like a crownless queen, I cannot blame your growth and change and ties,         You never had a vow.
A modified ruba'i. I had seen this form in a divan (collected poems) of an Ottoman poet once. I was inspired by Lana Del Rey and her older self as Lizzy Grant.
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Apr 18, 2018
Apr 18, 2018 at 1:08 PM UTC
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