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You are like a child who grows younger & younger every day, smoothing over lines with the sharp -cracks- of a smile, & swaying back & forth, back & forth like the swing in an overgrown backyard, like the child who sits (lonely) on that swing & grows backwards, (backwards) you regress further with every moment. You are like the hair that grows from the head of the child, ?wild? & unruly & never the same. Like their small, chubby fingers, you are clumsy, s t u m b l i n g around a dark world that offers you no rest from your actions, (& yet) unlike a small child who is more clever, quieter & observing each moment in life, (learning, growing by leaps & b o u n d s , showing that there is hope yet for them in our adult world,) you cannot seem to learn from the mistakes you make. Each error leads to another; like a child, you are running in a circle, forever chasing a butterfly that has lost its wings. Your toys lie scattered around you, abandoned, dusty, -cracked- & broken. Like a child, you grow tired of the same old routine, the people you see & the games they make you play, (day after day.) Moment after moment after unplanned moment you grow younger until one day you will be an infant, unspeaking. & then you will be wailing & wishing you could grow older & make it all up to me.
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Oct 11, 2012
Oct 11, 2012 at 12:49 AM UTC
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You are like a child who grows younger & younger every day, smoothing over lines with the sharp -cracks- of a smile, & swaying back & forth, back & forth like the swing in an overgrown backyard, like the child who sits (lonely) on that swing & grows backwards, (backwards) you regress further with every moment. You are like the hair that grows from the head of the child, ?wild? & unruly & never the same. Like their small, chubby fingers, you are clumsy, s t u m b l i n g around a dark world that offers you no rest from your actions, (& yet) unlike a small child who is more clever, quieter & observing each moment in life, (learning, growing by leaps & b o u n d s , showing that there is hope yet for them in our adult world,) you cannot seem to learn from the mistakes you make. Each error leads to another; like a child, you are running in a circle, forever chasing a butterfly that has lost its wings. Your toys lie scattered around you, abandoned, dusty, -cracked- & broken. Like a child, you grow tired of the same old routine, the people you see & the games they make you play, (day after day.) Moment after moment after unplanned moment you grow younger until one day you will be an infant, unspeaking. & then you will be wailing & wishing you could grow older & make it all up to me.
sometimes people don't change
r-saba
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Oct 11, 2012
Oct 11, 2012 at 12:49 AM UTC
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