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there is a place i want to see           which no man yet has seen a city built around a tree           where it has always been where animals feed off the fruits and no man's dared to step his boots           where flirting sun in sky just smiles and preens a city built around a tree           which no man yet has seen? how could a city none could see           be built and always been? who built it if it wasn't man? could animals, and if they can           would they also build zoos for you and me? (C)2012, Christos Rigakos
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Oct 10, 2012
Oct 10, 2012 at 12:51 PM UTC
a city built around a tree
there is a place i want to see           which no man yet has seen a city built around a tree           where it has always been where animals feed off the fruits and no man's dared to step his boots           where flirting sun in sky just smiles and preens a city built around a tree           which no man yet has seen? how could a city none could see           be built and always been? who built it if it wasn't man? could animals, and if they can           would they also build zoos for you and me? (C)2012, Christos Rigakos
Two septet stanzas of ABABCCB rhyme scheme which follow the structure of Eros & Psyche, except for the meter of 4-3-4-3-4-4-5.
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Oct 10, 2012
Oct 10, 2012 at 12:51 PM UTC
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