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Her eyes were pale, a blue crystallized moment frozen like an arctic ocean, frozen in a moment in time, and a beautiful one at that. Her hair, a smooth red, long strands of vanilla scented silk. Whether put up in a bun or let down, there was something about the way it framed her face. When let down, her hair complimented her smile in a way that can only be explained as upper class charm though being an every day country girl, but while also being somewhat natural in an animalistic way. Not in a barbaric sense, but a natural set of waves and curls that when combined with her fierce locking blue eyes seemed to grip my heart and aggressively pull it into her grasp. A sort of fierce sexuality hidden beneath her pale complexion. A fire like body, hair, and personality in equal measure. I, of course, found her beyond the definition of irresistible.
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Mar 28, 2018
Mar 28, 2018 at 10:17 PM UTC
When The Eyes Meet
Her eyes were pale, a blue crystallized moment frozen like an arctic ocean, frozen in a moment in time, and a beautiful one at that. Her hair, a smooth red, long strands of vanilla scented silk. Whether put up in a bun or let down, there was something about the way it framed her face. When let down, her hair complimented her smile in a way that can only be explained as upper class charm though being an every day country girl, but while also being somewhat natural in an animalistic way. Not in a barbaric sense, but a natural set of waves and curls that when combined with her fierce locking blue eyes seemed to grip my heart and aggressively pull it into her grasp. A sort of fierce sexuality hidden beneath her pale complexion. A fire like body, hair, and personality in equal measure. I, of course, found her beyond the definition of irresistible.
I am just drunk enough at the moment to upload this restructured version of one of the intros to one of my short stories
jamespiccolino
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Mar 28, 2018
Mar 28, 2018 at 10:17 PM UTC
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