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I don't edit my poetry for the most part it's first draft final draft and a writer friend of mine tells me that this makes the poetry more real and perhaps I'm inclined to agree in that it's more real in the same way that blood at a crime scene is infinitely more real than the grainy photos that make it to the papers with the chalk outlines and the grayscale acting as formalities, muddying up the action and excitement
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Mar 23, 2018
Mar 23, 2018 at 1:25 AM UTC
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I don't edit my poetry for the most part it's first draft final draft and a writer friend of mine tells me that this makes the poetry more real and perhaps I'm inclined to agree in that it's more real in the same way that blood at a crime scene is infinitely more real than the grainy photos that make it to the papers with the chalk outlines and the grayscale acting as formalities, muddying up the action and excitement
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Mar 23, 2018
Mar 23, 2018 at 1:25 AM UTC
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