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one moment ago every thing was fine the starter was fine the main exceptional the conversation whilst not exceptional held nuggets of interest and hints of wit. dessert came, looked scrumptious but before fork hit pastry it happened something was said, umbrage was taken and now we all sit, in the middle of a ferociously cold war, my husband caught with forkful between bowl and mouth gulps loudly and places fork back on plate apart from the two combatants, everyonehas become interested in the state of  their shoes, mine are in need of a polish. and still the fury roils around. i ask for the bill, pay our share leaving the cash on the plate.. we are too old, too tired to take part in what has become some one elses public domestic we grab some pastries to go.. and in a blink of an eye we depart the field... leaving the two sides blinking
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Mar 16, 2018
Mar 16, 2018 at 7:18 AM UTC
what just happened
one moment ago every thing was fine the starter was fine the main exceptional the conversation whilst not exceptional held nuggets of interest and hints of wit. dessert came, looked scrumptious but before fork hit pastry it happened something was said, umbrage was taken and now we all sit, in the middle of a ferociously cold war, my husband caught with forkful between bowl and mouth gulps loudly and places fork back on plate apart from the two combatants, everyonehas become interested in the state of  their shoes, mine are in need of a polish. and still the fury roils around. i ask for the bill, pay our share leaving the cash on the plate.. we are too old, too tired to take part in what has become some one elses public domestic we grab some pastries to go.. and in a blink of an eye we depart the field... leaving the two sides blinking
dinner out with friends...became awkward and uncomfortable...now at home comfortable...full of pastries....a quiet friday in....
betterdays
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Mar 16, 2018
Mar 16, 2018 at 7:18 AM UTC
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