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i hold the ring worth its weight in water a trinket of our love pooled in my palms i wonder does the surface glimmer the same for you as it does for me? would you savor every last drop and fall to the heat pleading for more? till death; for life holistic & ripened i am waiting for this silly trinket to solidify-- --but instead watch as its glimmer evaporates into air -- c
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Mar 12, 2018
Mar 12, 2018 at 12:25 PM UTC
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i hold the ring worth its weight in water a trinket of our love pooled in my palms i wonder does the surface glimmer the same for you as it does for me? would you savor every last drop and fall to the heat pleading for more? till death; for life holistic & ripened i am waiting for this silly trinket to solidify-- --but instead watch as its glimmer evaporates into air -- c
Sometimes I feel naive to the workings of love--whether I deserve to, or am able to, feel it/understand it, given my age. Recently I've thought about the possibility of marrying my partner later in life. However, I don't receive similar signals from them. This poem is alluding to the hypothetical result of proposal.
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Mar 12, 2018
Mar 12, 2018 at 12:25 PM UTC
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