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Sit down across from me in the tub I’ll sit criss cross Your feet can rest in my lap Take a Polaroid every time I look up into the water Then bite on my shoulder I’ll hold your wine glass Can I bring you to Copenhagen And introduce you to my art collector Friends We can make nice with everyone At fancy dinners Then go home and laugh at how stupid They all are Fall asleep on me As we take a train From somewhere To Paris I’ll drink you in with the scenery Outside our window As I drift off myself
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Mar 5, 2018
Mar 5, 2018 at 10:15 PM UTC
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Sit down across from me in the tub I’ll sit criss cross Your feet can rest in my lap Take a Polaroid every time I look up into the water Then bite on my shoulder I’ll hold your wine glass Can I bring you to Copenhagen And introduce you to my art collector Friends We can make nice with everyone At fancy dinners Then go home and laugh at how stupid They all are Fall asleep on me As we take a train From somewhere To Paris I’ll drink you in with the scenery Outside our window As I drift off myself
I felt like a lot of my work was either extremely abstract, or really impersonal, as if I refused to let myself speak directly on my emotions. It seems really cliche to me to write about someone, or about the love you found with someone. To me, pieces like that don't hold up well over time. My objective hear was to open myself up enough to write about love, but in a timeless way that still felt like me.
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21/M/New Jersey
Mar 5, 2018
Mar 5, 2018 at 10:15 PM UTC
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