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Right now today and tomorrow Consume my life and every second of every moment Time is of the essence Or so they say Let’s stop and think and breath and Maybe things would be different Between you and I Or me and her Or me and him Communication is key But how many times can you repeat the same thing Review reflect and edit But I hate to do that You get me as I am No rough drafts needed Thank you very much I am the original not a copy or an edit And I like it like that Fragmented It’s how my mind thinks You can’t follow along? I’m sorry But thank you for trying Time well spent? Or wasted? It’s what they say Who is, they? Anyway I could probably keep going Rambling on But for now I think this should suffice.
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Sep 27, 2012
Sep 27, 2012 at 12:01 AM UTC
Rough Draft and the Finished Piece
Right now today and tomorrow Consume my life and every second of every moment Time is of the essence Or so they say Let’s stop and think and breath and Maybe things would be different Between you and I Or me and her Or me and him Communication is key But how many times can you repeat the same thing Review reflect and edit But I hate to do that You get me as I am No rough drafts needed Thank you very much I am the original not a copy or an edit And I like it like that Fragmented It’s how my mind thinks You can’t follow along? I’m sorry But thank you for trying Time well spent? Or wasted? It’s what they say Who is, they? Anyway I could probably keep going Rambling on But for now I think this should suffice.
Literally a jumble of thoughts typed out as they came to mind, it's the rough draft and the finished piece all wrapped into one
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Dominican
Sep 27, 2012
Sep 27, 2012 at 12:01 AM UTC
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