These candles are cold
With frozen stalactite beards
But love blazed last night

david-alexander-walker

Last night

Love the image and the twist in the last line...

each line paints its own image...wonderful

Enjoy your short style very much, it is as Victoria says each line is a story in itself :o)

I absolutely adore your short poems! I can imagine the whole scene, and oh yeah, it's beautiful.