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The cool ocean breeze It makes me believe Believe that you are near Even though you could never be here Because I know that you died But still, it feels like your alive There was this time when I tried to take my life I thought of you and couldn't control the knife The room started to spin around My knee's went weak, and I fell to the ground For ten minutes I layed there crying Thinking of you and thinking of dying Only when I stopped thinking of death Was I able to regain all of my breath I know that it was you Watching over me like you'll always do I'm still not sure what I believe But you'll always seem near when I feel the cool ocean breeze
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Mar 13, 2010
Mar 13, 2010 at 2:37 PM UTC
Cool Ocean Breeze
The cool ocean breeze It makes me believe Believe that you are near Even though you could never be here Because I know that you died But still, it feels like your alive There was this time when I tried to take my life I thought of you and couldn't control the knife The room started to spin around My knee's went weak, and I fell to the ground For ten minutes I layed there crying Thinking of you and thinking of dying Only when I stopped thinking of death Was I able to regain all of my breath I know that it was you Watching over me like you'll always do I'm still not sure what I believe But you'll always seem near when I feel the cool ocean breeze
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Mar 13, 2010
Mar 13, 2010 at 2:37 PM UTC
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