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Needed someone to love someone to hold, someone to fall for Couldn't I have told You, that I wasn't cold Out of my mold I could not crowl Just a little bold That's what I needed to be, lord To confront the world No treasure, silver or gold Too young, I wasn't that old To take consideration, And of your love behold The world distorting your peace Your true self I could not uphold Couldn't you have managed to hold Hold onto me through madness and massacre How could I have believed We had no enemies When all I saw was war Our chances were rigged Our chances were not ours to deal Our places were not opportune Our cards were long fortold We held onto the unattainable We fell to the struggle from within We were fighting hard to rebuild What had already failed, Thinking the helpless Could reverse their inevitable fall In the questions, desperation, and pondering No catharsis, no purging, avails All the true revelations are lost Only un-resourceful quiescence stalls
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Sep 20, 2012
Sep 20, 2012 at 10:06 PM UTC
Reconnaissance of Failed Love
Needed someone to love someone to hold, someone to fall for Couldn't I have told You, that I wasn't cold Out of my mold I could not crowl Just a little bold That's what I needed to be, lord To confront the world No treasure, silver or gold Too young, I wasn't that old To take consideration, And of your love behold The world distorting your peace Your true self I could not uphold Couldn't you have managed to hold Hold onto me through madness and massacre How could I have believed We had no enemies When all I saw was war Our chances were rigged Our chances were not ours to deal Our places were not opportune Our cards were long fortold We held onto the unattainable We fell to the struggle from within We were fighting hard to rebuild What had already failed, Thinking the helpless Could reverse their inevitable fall In the questions, desperation, and pondering No catharsis, no purging, avails All the true revelations are lost Only un-resourceful quiescence stalls
September 20, 2012
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Sep 20, 2012
Sep 20, 2012 at 10:06 PM UTC
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