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The door closed behind us, your father had given you the layout of what you were permitted to do and what not. As we walked along the path into town, you said: after the film if my parents are out, maybe we can. Can what? I said. Can do things, you replied. The evening air was sharp as a blade, the moon hung above us like a bright coin. Bit risky, I said, what if they come back while we are doing things. You worry too much, you said. If your father came back and caught you doing things you'd be scared and worried, I said. But that makes it exciting, you said. We walked past the parish church lit up by lights, walked past old gravestones the names and dates almost gone. We'll be like that one day, you said, be out of it, be nothing, be dead. We walked up the street looking at street lights lit up all ahead.
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Feb 17, 2018
Feb 17, 2018 at 3:53 AM UTC
After the Door Closing 1969.
The door closed behind us, your father had given you the layout of what you were permitted to do and what not. As we walked along the path into town, you said: after the film if my parents are out, maybe we can. Can what? I said. Can do things, you replied. The evening air was sharp as a blade, the moon hung above us like a bright coin. Bit risky, I said, what if they come back while we are doing things. You worry too much, you said. If your father came back and caught you doing things you'd be scared and worried, I said. But that makes it exciting, you said. We walked past the parish church lit up by lights, walked past old gravestones the names and dates almost gone. We'll be like that one day, you said, be out of it, be nothing, be dead. We walked up the street looking at street lights lit up all ahead.
TerryCollett
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Feb 17, 2018
Feb 17, 2018 at 3:53 AM UTC
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