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Cobblestone, Your eyes candlelit, blazing I've lit a fire for you Oh the fumbling of hands we share, here The fumbling of elements many have felt And I wonder if I am any different-- A trundled body of mistaken chemicals Brash, raw-- Nevertheless I wish to learn the angles To love -- c
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Feb 16, 2018
Feb 16, 2018 at 2:53 PM UTC
Formulaic – Response to Angel Olsen’s “California”
Cobblestone, Your eyes candlelit, blazing I've lit a fire for you Oh the fumbling of hands we share, here The fumbling of elements many have felt And I wonder if I am any different-- A trundled body of mistaken chemicals Brash, raw-- Nevertheless I wish to learn the angles To love -- c
A dinner date brimming with "immediate intimacy". Angel Olsen has some beautifully written lyrics. This song, California, speaks wonders about the initial feelings of a new love. Questioning the validity of those feelings, where they come from, and how they can carry you away into a dream. "Who knows what it means to have a feeling buried so deep down?"
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Feb 16, 2018
Feb 16, 2018 at 2:53 PM UTC
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