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Wandering in thought Descending internal wither Seemingly asleep in wakefulness Is this mind bitter? Externally silent Internally loud; Lost in mind with endless drama, Out of mind with mindless trauma Departed away in unrest slumber Dazed in never-ending thoughts; Clouded by confused wonder Is this what I sought?
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Feb 6, 2018
Feb 6, 2018 at 6:02 PM UTC
Dramatic Silence
Wandering in thought Descending internal wither Seemingly asleep in wakefulness Is this mind bitter? Externally silent Internally loud; Lost in mind with endless drama, Out of mind with mindless trauma Departed away in unrest slumber Dazed in never-ending thoughts; Clouded by confused wonder Is this what I sought?
Meaning: One day I was laying on my bed and I started to have racing thoughts. Thoughts that quite bothered me and filled me with sadness and confusion. I felt the need to express these feelings and thoughts into a poem. The specific random words that don't seem to go together such as "confused wonder" truly express what I was feeling during that moment. A feeling of confusion because of why and what was happening but a sense of wonder at the same time at why that happens and the confusion in itself is full of wonder. The thoughts seem so loud but on the outside it is only silence.
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Feb 6, 2018
Feb 6, 2018 at 6:02 PM UTC
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