Red eyes,
set so wide.
Perplexed eyes,
that can hide.
Closed eyes
and a broken smile.
Hollow laughter,
an empty voice.
Quiet speak,
a careless speech.
False assurances
with little joy.
A beating heart
and a broken smile.
*No need to be ravelled up so tight,
just let loose and undo the fright*
Sep 12, 2012
Sep 12, 2012 at 6:34 PM UTC
Red eyes,
set so wide.
Perplexed eyes,
that can hide.
Closed eyes
and a broken smile.
Hollow laughter,
an empty voice.
Quiet speak,
a careless speech.
False assurances
with little joy.
A beating heart
and a broken smile.
*No need to be ravelled up so tight,
just let loose and undo the fright*
First time sticking to a form, not sure if I like it. Dampens the natural flow, almost rendering the writing process mathematical.
